A Good Critic
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(04-10-2014, 12:08 PM)Erthona Wrote:  Well of course, look who the speaker is (plus it's not written in metrical verse), and the rhymes are slightly jarring also, don't you think?

dale
Yes. The diction too. But the meter is the most painful. I don't think I could read it twice.
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A Good Critic - by Erthona - 04-10-2014, 11:43 AM
RE: A Good Critic - by milo - 04-10-2014, 11:50 AM
RE: A Good Critic - by Erthona - 04-10-2014, 12:08 PM
RE: A Good Critic - by milo - 04-10-2014, 12:16 PM
RE: A Good Critic - by Erthona - 04-10-2014, 02:09 PM



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