A Good Critic
#3
Well of course, look who the speaker is (plus it's not written in metrical verse), and the rhymes are slightly jarring also, don't you think?

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A Good Critic - by Erthona - 04-10-2014, 11:43 AM
RE: A Good Critic - by milo - 04-10-2014, 11:50 AM
RE: A Good Critic - by Erthona - 04-10-2014, 12:08 PM
RE: A Good Critic - by milo - 04-10-2014, 12:16 PM
RE: A Good Critic - by Erthona - 04-10-2014, 02:09 PM



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