Babbling Old Fool

[Thoughtjotter]

That's more even handed. I like the first two phrases, but I think I would switch out this 3rd stanza one for the new. That last line turns the knife very well.



"Never demanding to be understood,
Sharing his gift could only be good.
Those who know him can always expect,
There is no subject in which he can not reflect."


Dale

are you saying I need to put this original stanza #3 with the revision and can the revised stanza #3?
Yes, and maybe change the "can" to "will" in the last line to make it more probable?

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Post your revision as a new post, I think is protocol

No, it's not. If you look at the very first post in the forum
http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/announcements.php?aid=27
The instructions are there.

Sorry about the confusion, an inborn talent of mine. I need to study the guidelines more closely more often. My study habits are closely related to the osmosis process.