04-10-2014, 02:57 AM
Reading well done meter's not a struggle, it's a sweet ride. For me, learning meter and form is a struggle, sometimes to the point where no decent ideas get through. It's encouraging to read something as structured yet free as this one is. Maybe there's a light at the end of the tunnel. Thanks for that. And yes, for me it would have been more difficult if you had written it the way you hear it. 
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