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A Crofter Dies edit 0.0001abu
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04-10-2014, 02:53 AM
Your morbid obsession with aging and death is paying off in pearly tombstones on this retreat. I was afraid Donald duck had met his anatine end. I like your rhyming parenthetical device, as it becomes a pub song with almost a chorus. What, no fought-fraught stride to march in time with the other stanzas?
 Nice tale from the Coylet my friend./Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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A Crofter Dies edit 0.0001abu - by tectak - 04-10-2014, 01:09 AM
RE: A Crofter Dies - by ellajam - 04-10-2014, 01:39 AM
RE: A Crofter Dies - by Erthona - 04-10-2014, 01:48 AM
RE: A Crofter Dies - by tectak - 04-10-2014, 02:20 AM
RE: A Crofter Dies - by abu nuwas - 04-10-2014, 02:47 AM
RE: A Crofter Dies edit 0.0001abu - by tectak - 04-10-2014, 06:28 AM
RE: A Crofter Dies edit 0.0001abu - by ChristopherSea - 04-10-2014, 08:07 AM
RE: A Crofter Dies edit 0.0001abu - by tectak - 04-10-2014, 08:33 AM
RE: A Crofter Dies edit 0.0001abu - by ChristopherSea - 04-10-2014, 07:24 PM
RE: A Crofter Dies - by ChristopherSea - 04-10-2014, 02:53 AM
RE: A Crofter Dies - by ellajam - 04-10-2014, 02:57 AM
RE: A Crofter Dies - by Erthona - 04-10-2014, 06:10 AM
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