04-09-2014, 02:32 AM
(04-09-2014, 12:30 AM)crow Wrote: I can't help but say this, bc it's a funny story--this one's based on a photo of a painting a girl from okcupid txted me, and I liked the painting and we were hitting it off, so I wrote this poem and sent it to her, somehow not grocking the fact that a creepy poem about bats eating flies might warn someone away.
She ended up canceling our first date hahaha
Ellajam--thanks for pointing out the weaknesses here. I'll give it another rewrite to see if I can get it to be consistently engaging. Thanks for the notes!
Internet dating's funny that way.
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