Limerick #2
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(04-08-2014, 02:35 AM)kindofahippy Wrote:  When once your "you're" as poor as a dust bunny Is "dust" needed?
And nothing in life seems so funny
Just look at the masses
With their higher taxes
And imagine them drowning in honey
This limerick has a bizarre, arbitrary last line, though it's amusing because of that. I really liked this limerick, overallSmile Thank you for the read, and my critique is JMHO.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Limerick #2 - by kindofahippy - 04-08-2014, 02:35 AM
RE: Limerick #2 - by Mopkins - 04-08-2014, 03:11 AM
RE: Limerick #2 - by tectak - 04-08-2014, 03:54 AM
RE: Limerick #2 - by heslopian - 04-08-2014, 03:59 AM
RE: Limerick #2 - by Erthona - 04-08-2014, 04:11 AM
RE: Limerick #2 - by tectak - 04-08-2014, 04:17 AM
RE: Limerick #2 - by Erthona - 04-08-2014, 10:50 AM



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