04-08-2014, 03:59 AM
(04-08-2014, 02:35 AM)kindofahippy Wrote: When once your "you're" as poor as a dust bunny Is "dust" needed?This limerick has a bizarre, arbitrary last line, though it's amusing because of that. I really liked this limerick, overall
And nothing in life seems so funny
Just look at the masses
With their higher taxes
And imagine them drowning in honey
Thank you for the read, and my critique is JMHO.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

