Last words...

[Erthona]

Question: Do you see any problem with these two lines

"I had wishes that longer you would stay"

"I can only hope that one day we can meet"

I am at a loss, did the speaker meet this person or not.

If you remove the forced lines, reversed syntax, contradictory, and/or senseless information, I'm not sure there is much left.

You left to soon,
before it was noon,
I'm deeper than you think,
believe me I don't stink.
So...whenever you're feeling stressed,
just do you best.
Hope to see you sometime,
yes, rhyme does rhyme.

Sorry, but this seems like a computer translation from one language to another that someone haphazardly made some rhymes after the translation was finished. Maybe you should leave the rhyme alone and try writing sentences, or...if you insist on rhyming use a simple form to start, try reading William Blake's "Songs of Innocence and Experience". You can find them several places on the web for free.

Best,

Dale