I Wished I Was The Water -edited

[Thoughtjotter]

Hello Mopkins, The Shower is great idea to display a flood of sensual fantasies.
I am a beginner myself, with a long way to go. I can only offer what seems to flow best for me, so please help me along my way when possible.
"How I watched you in the shower".... Is this a question and how many ways are there to watch someone in the shower?
Maybe: While I watched you in the shower,
"All my lovesick thoughts untold".............. " all my fantasies were bold.
"And I wished I was the water" How I wished to be that water,
"That so wetly, warmly flowed"................ " as it so wet and warmly flowed.