Cain and Yo
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I like this well, as it continues the pointless story you had started to tell somewhere else, but I have never heard of "home things" and don't know what they are, so that was a bit confusing. Other than that it is a right decent poem, and that's all I can say about that.

have a good day now,

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Cain and Yo - by rowens - 04-06-2014, 07:09 AM
RE: Cain and Yo - by Erthona - 04-06-2014, 08:22 AM
RE: Cain and Yo - by rowens - 04-06-2014, 10:28 AM



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