Enûma Eliš 1st edit, Leanne, Philatone
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If I had some better tools I would analyze this more closely, but I got the word striped when I think you meant stripped. There was also some awkward syntax that can be cleaned up by some fine tuning. Intriguing topic though as I believe the feminine chaos is butchered for creation in this myth.
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RE: Enûma Eliš 1st edit, Leanne, Philatone - by Brownlie - 04-04-2014, 02:32 AM



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