04-01-2014, 04:12 PM
(04-01-2014, 08:03 AM)Erthona Wrote: On the water you old dodder,Ah, history Dale, history. The auld alliance, Scotland and France.Too subtle? Or had you just forgotten?
getting wet your underpants,
to praise the Scottish fare & clime,
you shame yourself by "Aide" of France!
Outside of using a French phrase as a title to remember and praise Scotland,
I find no fault in this poem.
Dale



(04-01-2014, 07:56 AM)Keith Wrote:Thanks for this Keith. I always wax dour here....but I do love the country.(04-01-2014, 07:46 AM)tectak Wrote: Bring to me a torn white heather, that I may recall the brae.This makes me wish I felt this passionate about a place such as this, very much enjoyed he splendid internal and subtle end rhymes. Best Keith
Lay in my hand a Black Grouse feather, better to relive the day.
Pour for me a glowing whisky, constant comfort through the years.
Take me where they smoke-cure salmon, excuse for sudden welling tears.
Then play for me the pipes 'till gloaming, fill the spaces left to fill
and I will carry this land in me...today, tomorrow, always, still.
tectak
Glen Moriston
2014
Best,
tectak

