03-31-2014, 05:26 AM
I wonder if a comma is needed at the end of line three, trivial, I know.
Searching for a nit without much luck. I always understood the beguine to be a foxtrot style of dance so I wondered if this really applies:
"I’ve heard from profane sources that
it’s still danced in Martinique,
under pretense of sweaty sex," perhaps... I haven't been in the West Indies. Nice job with this.
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Searching for a nit without much luck. I always understood the beguine to be a foxtrot style of dance so I wondered if this really applies:
"I’ve heard from profane sources that
it’s still danced in Martinique,
under pretense of sweaty sex," perhaps... I haven't been in the West Indies. Nice job with this.
My best
Heart