03-30-2014, 11:14 PM
Here a comma, there, a comma, ever,y,where, a, comma, comma. Does N suppose he can do it because it's been done before, or is he saying he could do it, /but/ it's already been done before?
I'm not sure what Hemingway-sharp edges are. Wasn't he a little rough around the edges for the day? (If that's what is being said you should use the hyphen.)
I don't think the break in the middle of uncer-tainty was very successful, but that's just my take.
I'm not sure what Hemingway-sharp edges are. Wasn't he a little rough around the edges for the day? (If that's what is being said you should use the hyphen.)
I don't think the break in the middle of uncer-tainty was very successful, but that's just my take.

