Begin not the Beguine

[Erthona]

Thanks, I understand what you are saying, yes Beguine is connotatively rich, and some of that is here, but the main emphasis for me, was using the Beguine tempo/rhythm as a backbone for the cadence of the poem, as well as to metaphorically associate it with freedom.

Thanks for giving it a read, and for your thoughtful comments.


Dale