03-29-2014, 02:18 AM
Hi, 
just a suggestion as I am not knowledgeable enough to comment on form etc. In your last stanza could you carry on with the erotic undertow by using something like "brush/es stroking" etc?
Regs Chris.
just a suggestion as I am not knowledgeable enough to comment on form etc. In your last stanza could you carry on with the erotic undertow by using something like "brush/es stroking" etc? Regs Chris.