Senor-ewe
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(03-28-2014, 08:07 AM)Erthona Wrote:  Introducing new "Farang" poem called Senor-ewe 3 lines, 7 syllables per line, 1st and 3rd line can rhyme. Oh yes, and it has to seem like it makes sense, but upon further inspection one realizes it does not.

I ate Luchetta’s taco
now I wear a serape
and call myself poor Paco
This is a put on.

Hey, you pinched my Luchetta, my taco and my Paco! Angry


See (from your senryu thread):

Paco says sharp cheddar
is better with
Luchetta’s sweet taco

I guess it's a 'Farang'-ku Big Grin
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Messages In This Thread
Senor-ewe - by Erthona - 03-28-2014, 08:07 AM
RE: Senor-ewe - by ellajam - 03-28-2014, 10:27 PM
RE: Senor-ewe - by ChristopherSea - 03-28-2014, 10:43 PM
RE: Senor-ewe - by Erthona - 03-29-2014, 01:30 PM
RE: Senor-ewe - by ChristopherSea - 03-31-2014, 06:12 PM
RE: Senor-ewe - by Erthona - 04-01-2014, 02:00 PM



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