03-27-2014, 10:08 PM
Specifics are not a problem for me Jeremy, even if not used, they illustrate alternatives which is always welcome. Yes, I have played with those aureoles too, the milk and cookies, the play on areolas, as well as halos and those cloud-like glows around religious works are called the same. 'Another' does apply to back to the drawing board. The but/but and I've/I've both glare out at me as well. I will take a look at them and find alternatives.
Dissonance is me forte.
The way the lines were designed to read were: ideas/but how do I address them? design approaches/anticipated construction problems (it's not easy to design a lover). This more that likely results in the effect you noticed. I am a bit deaf, dumb and blind when it comes to meter. I just sound it out in my own cranium's theater and the acoustics are poor there.
Thank you very much for reading this and sharing your impressions. Your advice will be considered as usual and any unvoiced opinions or specifics are encouraged, should you care to stop back.
Dissonance is me forte.
The way the lines were designed to read were: ideas/but how do I address them? design approaches/anticipated construction problems (it's not easy to design a lover). This more that likely results in the effect you noticed. I am a bit deaf, dumb and blind when it comes to meter. I just sound it out in my own cranium's theater and the acoustics are poor there. Thank you very much for reading this and sharing your impressions. Your advice will be considered as usual and any unvoiced opinions or specifics are encouraged, should you care to stop back.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris