Triptych
#23
Really?

So using unstressed dithyrambs and iambs....

I/fol/low the/CROWD down/TO the/riv/er.
It/is/cold ev/EN for/morn/ing it's/COLD.
The/Jor/dan shim/MERS through/the/reeds, green/SILK,
lick/ing/the foot/PRINTS at/THE wat/er's/edge
in/TO flat/NESS.

And changing to iambs, in the Greek style, for descriptive passages

He/WAITS for/US, glow/ING,
on/THE far/BANK, hand/IN wel/COME to/CROSS.

before returning to Bacchanal

The/New sun/DAZZLES, some/stag/ger bright/blind/ed
in/TO the/wa/ter, the/SPLASH of//feet/dulls

is not using meter, or rhythm... and it's MERELY free verse.

Well if you say so...
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Messages In This Thread
Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-25-2014, 09:10 PM
RE: Triptych - by ChristopherSea - 03-25-2014, 09:52 PM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-25-2014, 10:52 PM
RE: Triptych - by ChristopherSea - 03-25-2014, 11:02 PM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-25-2014, 11:26 PM
RE: Triptych - by ChristopherSea - 03-26-2014, 12:31 AM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-26-2014, 12:47 AM
RE: Triptych - by ChristopherSea - 03-26-2014, 12:52 AM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-26-2014, 01:00 AM
RE: Triptych - by tectak - 03-26-2014, 03:21 AM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-26-2014, 05:51 AM
RE: Triptych - by ChristopherSea - 03-26-2014, 08:13 AM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-26-2014, 08:18 AM
RE: Triptych - by ChristopherSea - 03-26-2014, 08:57 AM
RE: Triptych - by milo - 03-26-2014, 09:11 AM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-26-2014, 09:17 AM
RE: Triptych - by ChristopherSea - 03-26-2014, 10:52 AM
RE: Triptych - by cidermaid - 03-26-2014, 05:08 PM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-26-2014, 05:13 PM
RE: Triptych - by milo - 03-27-2014, 10:04 AM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-27-2014, 08:26 AM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-27-2014, 08:37 PM
RE: Triptych - by milo - 03-27-2014, 10:51 PM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-27-2014, 11:56 PM
RE: Triptych - by milo - 03-28-2014, 12:03 AM
RE: Triptych - by ChristopherSea - 03-28-2014, 12:10 AM
RE: Triptych - by milo - 03-28-2014, 08:10 AM
RE: Triptych - by Erthona - 03-13-2015, 03:56 AM



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