03-27-2014, 08:37 PM
Really?
So using unstressed dithyrambs and iambs....
I/fol/low the/CROWD down/TO the/riv/er.
It/is/cold ev/EN for/morn/ing it's/COLD.
The/Jor/dan shim/MERS through/the/reeds, green/SILK,
lick/ing/the foot/PRINTS at/THE wat/er's/edge
in/TO flat/NESS.
And changing to iambs, in the Greek style, for descriptive passages
He/WAITS for/US, glow/ING,
on/THE far/BANK, hand/IN wel/COME to/CROSS.
before returning to Bacchanal
The/New sun/DAZZLES, some/stag/ger bright/blind/ed
in/TO the/wa/ter, the/SPLASH of//feet/dulls
is not using meter, or rhythm... and it's MERELY free verse.
Well if you say so...
So using unstressed dithyrambs and iambs....
I/fol/low the/CROWD down/TO the/riv/er.
It/is/cold ev/EN for/morn/ing it's/COLD.
The/Jor/dan shim/MERS through/the/reeds, green/SILK,
lick/ing/the foot/PRINTS at/THE wat/er's/edge
in/TO flat/NESS.
And changing to iambs, in the Greek style, for descriptive passages
He/WAITS for/US, glow/ING,
on/THE far/BANK, hand/IN wel/COME to/CROSS.
before returning to Bacchanal
The/New sun/DAZZLES, some/stag/ger bright/blind/ed
in/TO the/wa/ter, the/SPLASH of//feet/dulls
is not using meter, or rhythm... and it's MERELY free verse.
Well if you say so...

