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< hungry fish > (evoku)

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03-27-2014, 08:27 PM

Ray, this did not work for me. The wording format left no "movement" in the poem.
I could not grasp where the poem wanted to take me.
The connection of the 3 lines is tenuous, I can try to work out what is going on, but when I do it does not quite add up.

Thank you. JG

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< hungry fish > (evoku) - by rayheinrich - 03-27-2014, 08:41 AM

RE: < hungry fish > (evoku) - by Erthona - 03-27-2014, 01:45 PM

RE: < hungry fish > (evoku) - by ChristopherSea - 03-27-2014, 06:29 PM

RE: < hungry fish > (evoku) - by John Galt - 03-27-2014, 08:27 PM

RE: < hungry fish > (evoku) - by rayheinrich - 04-01-2014, 11:34 AM

RE: < hungry fish > (evoku) - by Erthona - 04-01-2014, 12:03 PM

RE: < hungry fish > (evoku) - by rayheinrich - 04-02-2014, 03:15 PM

RE: < hungry fish > (evoku) - by Erthona - 04-04-2014, 03:45 PM

RE: < hungry fish > (evoku) - by rayheinrich - 04-04-2014, 03:53 PM

RE: < hungry fish > (evoku) - by Markworth - 06-08-2014, 10:46 AM

RE: < hungry fish > (evoku) - by rayheinrich - 06-08-2014, 02:11 PM

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