03-27-2014, 09:14 AM
rowens' already pointed out the obvious errors. I have nothing to add to that, except there is no continuity in the line length, and the rhyme jumps around, although mostly couplets.
In terms of content, sorry, I don't get this, I mean I understand the words (except for Opec- Organization of Petroleum Exporting Countries), but this is just a variation on a theme that has been done hundreds of times before. Maybe it's suppose to be a metaphor for something, but there is not a clue of what that might be, at least not that I can see.
Best,
Dale
In terms of content, sorry, I don't get this, I mean I understand the words (except for Opec- Organization of Petroleum Exporting Countries), but this is just a variation on a theme that has been done hundreds of times before. Maybe it's suppose to be a metaphor for something, but there is not a clue of what that might be, at least not that I can see.
Best,
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.