Triptych
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A couple of notes.

The basic rhythm of the piece is the dithyramb. With two dithyrambs and two iambs per line where possible - 'to receive favour. I sit on a dune' - dithyramb iamb, iamb dithyramb.

The theme as indicated in the title is John the Baptist and his relationship with Jesus, or the other way around if you want.
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Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-25-2014, 09:10 PM
RE: Triptych - by ChristopherSea - 03-25-2014, 09:52 PM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-25-2014, 10:52 PM
RE: Triptych - by ChristopherSea - 03-25-2014, 11:02 PM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-25-2014, 11:26 PM
RE: Triptych - by ChristopherSea - 03-26-2014, 12:31 AM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-26-2014, 12:47 AM
RE: Triptych - by ChristopherSea - 03-26-2014, 12:52 AM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-26-2014, 01:00 AM
RE: Triptych - by tectak - 03-26-2014, 03:21 AM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-26-2014, 05:51 AM
RE: Triptych - by ChristopherSea - 03-26-2014, 08:13 AM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-26-2014, 08:18 AM
RE: Triptych - by ChristopherSea - 03-26-2014, 08:57 AM
RE: Triptych - by milo - 03-26-2014, 09:11 AM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-26-2014, 09:17 AM
RE: Triptych - by ChristopherSea - 03-26-2014, 10:52 AM
RE: Triptych - by cidermaid - 03-26-2014, 05:08 PM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-26-2014, 05:13 PM
RE: Triptych - by milo - 03-27-2014, 10:04 AM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-27-2014, 08:26 AM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-27-2014, 08:37 PM
RE: Triptych - by milo - 03-27-2014, 10:51 PM
RE: Triptych - by jeremyyoung - 03-27-2014, 11:56 PM
RE: Triptych - by milo - 03-28-2014, 12:03 AM
RE: Triptych - by ChristopherSea - 03-28-2014, 12:10 AM
RE: Triptych - by milo - 03-28-2014, 08:10 AM
RE: Triptych - by Erthona - 03-13-2015, 03:56 AM



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