A weird attempt at free verse (I almost always rhyme)

[Leanne]

I like this verse of yours.
Though I'm not sure how "free" it is.
Raw and honest. That is the key.
To make your free verse.
Truly free.
Write with blood and ink.
Write things that no one will read, until they go through your things after you've died.

Very good. Now try writing critique instead of cliche and hackneyed opinion. For guidelines on writing critiques, you should read this thread -- if that doesn't help you, there are plenty of others around the site.