03-26-2014, 10:54 AM
Keith,
This is pretty funny, but for me the jumping in line length really gets in the way of enjoying it. This starts off in ballad meter, which is a good meter to use for this sort of poem, I just wished you'd stayed with it.
Dale
This is pretty funny, but for me the jumping in line length really gets in the way of enjoying it. This starts off in ballad meter, which is a good meter to use for this sort of poem, I just wished you'd stayed with it.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.