Vanitas

[71degrees]

I don't know the rules about this modern free verse, where line breaks are supposed to be and the like (do readers ever read it the way you do?), so I don't have much to say on that.

But there is something I really like about this poem, something I identify with. There's a really good poem in here, methinks. Close, it seems to me.

Maybe others will have something constructive to say along these lines which I am unable to.

Thanks for the offering.

I don't know if their are any rules for free verse. None I am aware of anyway. Glad you liked something about this poem. Appreciate the response.