03-25-2014, 12:18 PM
(03-24-2014, 03:30 PM)Gypsy Irish Wrote: This poem is vague, but I think it could be helped worth an eye toward punctuation. There are words capitalized that needn't be, and commas in odd places. However, I loved the imagery the word choice this invoked.I used punctuation and capitalization this way intentionally, it is to emphasize certain words and change the way you read along.
