03-25-2014, 11:54 AM
I don't know the rules about this modern free verse, where line breaks are supposed to be and the like (do readers ever read it the way you do?), so I don't have much to say on that.
But there is something I really like about this poem, something I identify with. There's a really good poem in here, methinks. Close, it seems to me.
Maybe others will have something constructive to say along these lines which I am unable to.
Thanks for the offering.
But there is something I really like about this poem, something I identify with. There's a really good poem in here, methinks. Close, it seems to me.
Maybe others will have something constructive to say along these lines which I am unable to.
Thanks for the offering.
You can't hate me more than I hate myself. I win.
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."