03-25-2014, 06:36 AM
@Dale Mostly what I'm looking for Is practicing rhythm, it's not particularly poetic in any other form its really just a braggadocios character , and it isn't really meant to be super dark and deep. If the lines read decently smooth than I guess so far, i'm reaching that goal of rhythm.
(I Should have stated that within the original post; apologies)
(I Should have stated that within the original post; apologies)

