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The smell of death outside my door

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03-24-2014, 02:37 PM

Yes, it does go to a longer line, less peppy.

Thanks,

Dale

NobodyNothing,
Yes it is kind of slangy, which was my intent, doesn't mean it works. I'll keep that in mind when I revisit it later.

Thanks,

Dale

How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.

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The smell of death outside my door - by Erthona - 03-18-2014, 03:56 AM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by tectak - 03-18-2014, 04:05 AM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by Erthona - 03-18-2014, 04:12 AM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by ChristopherSea - 03-18-2014, 04:54 AM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by tectak - 03-18-2014, 06:14 PM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by ChristopherSea - 03-18-2014, 06:39 PM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by Erthona - 03-18-2014, 04:58 AM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by ellajam - 03-18-2014, 07:06 AM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by Erthona - 03-18-2014, 12:41 PM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by NobodyNothing - 03-18-2014, 01:04 PM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by jeremyyoung - 03-18-2014, 10:41 PM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by Erthona - 03-24-2014, 02:37 PM

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