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Orca Strike

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Are you alluding to me?

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03-24-2014, 01:48 AM

I'll echo ellajam, try and sort out the punctuation, then start on the poem proper.
The first didn't work well enough for me, I just couldn't make it work.

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Orca Strike - by chrisgas - 03-23-2014, 06:58 AM

RE: Orca Strike - by billy - 03-23-2014, 06:56 PM

RE: Orca Strike - by chrisgas - 03-23-2014, 09:44 PM

RE: Orca Strike - by ellajam - 03-23-2014, 10:44 PM

RE: Orca Strike - by chrisgas - 03-24-2014, 12:29 AM

RE: Orca Strike - by ellajam - 03-24-2014, 06:12 AM

RE: Orca Strike - by billy - 03-24-2014, 01:48 AM

RE: Orca Strike - by chrisgas - 03-24-2014, 05:31 PM

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