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There was once a young childish man
Who loved science and got dirty hands.
Until he met this lady,
Elegant, pretty, a little nerdy.
All he wishes for are her hands.




My second attempt at poem using limerick. Any advise really helps to improve my poetic techniques Big Grin
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a change - by 1skylande1 - 03-23-2014, 01:53 PM
RE: a change - by ellajam - 03-25-2014, 03:21 AM
RE: a change - by ChristopherSea - 03-25-2014, 04:32 AM
RE: a change - by ellajam - 03-25-2014, 04:43 AM
RE: a change - by tectak - 03-25-2014, 05:43 AM
RE: a change - by billy - 03-25-2014, 06:53 PM
RE: a change - by ChristopherSea - 03-25-2014, 07:29 PM
RE: a change - by 1skylande1 - 03-29-2014, 02:34 PM
RE: a change - by billy - 03-29-2014, 07:54 PM
RE: a change - by Mopkins - 04-05-2014, 08:47 PM
RE: a change - by Burlesque3Rogue - 04-06-2014, 05:13 AM
RE: a change - by California - 04-07-2014, 09:30 PM



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