03-22-2014, 02:58 PM
We can't give you an idea. We can help you with sound. So I'd go with idea every time, as long as you understand (as you apparently do) that there's still more work to be done to bring it out perfectly.
Because I firmly believe that poems should be experienced aloud as well as on the page -- and neither position is more important than the other -- it is vital that a poem sounds the way you want it to. But like I said, that can happen in the workshop, not in your head. The more you workshop, the more you'll be able to do on your own.
Because I firmly believe that poems should be experienced aloud as well as on the page -- and neither position is more important than the other -- it is vital that a poem sounds the way you want it to. But like I said, that can happen in the workshop, not in your head. The more you workshop, the more you'll be able to do on your own.
It could be worse