It's all in the mind
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Does your condition cause you to forget how to change the y to i and add -es? :p

"most of my speech is foul and abrupt"... hmm... I fail to see a problem with this... Hysterical

But you know what? This is a perfect analogy, very consistently drawn and with an incredibly powerful close. Which is why, aside from grammar and spelling, I have no changes to suggest.
It could be worse
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It's all in the mind - by Keith - 03-22-2014, 09:43 AM
RE: It's all in the mind - by Leanne - 03-22-2014, 09:47 AM
RE: It's all in the mind - by Keith - 03-22-2014, 09:55 AM
RE: It's all in the mind - by Leanne - 03-22-2014, 10:03 AM
RE: It's all in the mind - by Keith - 03-22-2014, 11:07 PM



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