Play it again Sam

[chrisgas]

I'm cliche and cheesy, so I like it. "Then it's time to bomb it" I hear you say!
The second line in the second stanza, could you play with "fear/fears" rather than "hear". Another cheesy rhyme!

No, there is a difference.

This poem is all dialogue, the old pop idol speaking, would he use perfect English or avoid the odd cliche? Of course not, how many of us do?

If you want to give authenticity to dialogue it’s a point worth remembering.

Regards Cari.

Sorry Cari, I wasn't trying to be clever. Cos I know I am not! I'll remember your point. Thanks.