I once had nothing…but I have most of it left ( Seasick Sam)

[tectak]

The formatting distracted me from reading this a bit. I kind of catch a bit of philosophical "letting go" in here.. this piece feels abstract, which can be good in its own way. However I feel this is only a small start. I think you could develop it and turn it into something else, and if it was just a 4 line starting stanza it wouldn't be bad at all as an intro.

Thanks Loq,
This is an old piece tagged for chris sea. It may be revisited if I get any more decrepit
Best,
tectak