03-21-2014, 11:15 AM
(03-21-2014, 11:10 AM)jeremyyoung Wrote: I suggest you study rhetoric.Ah. I see. I'm fairly young, 17, to be exact. So. I'm learning. That's all I can do.
At which point you will understand the satire.
I didn't quite get any hints of satire from it, but that might be my untrained eyes. Poetry (and reading it) appears to be a learned skill. You don't just "get it." It takes practice. So. In the future, my feedback might be of more use to you.

