The Feminist Case Against Cross-dressing

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I think this piece was well written compared to the other first few compositions I read. It has a certain older almost Shakespearean feeling however I hesitate to call it that because that places a bit too much expectation on a poem. Anyway, it seems like it is a tad bit general and feels like a first draft. I would try and zone in on one topic specifically, the other philosophical points could be reduced in importance.