Missing You

[Deaf Cat in the Blue Hat]

You can write anyway you want. Besides the awkward phrasing and the forced rhyme, there isn't much to the poem. The content is small, the awkwardness stands out everywhere. If you're trying to write with an old style you still need content.

Thank you very much for your comment. I realize that much of the content is cryptic and held between the lines and neigh impossible to glean for someone who did not know her.

I need to be more clear and expressive and apply less ingenuity in order to write of complex events, emotions, etc through simple word associations.