Missing You

[Deaf Cat in the Blue Hat]

Are you comfortable with the awkward usage that goes on for most of this poem? Do you think the rhymes seem forced?

I am comfortable with it. Even in prose writing, I tend to write in awkward phrasings, or so I have been told many, many times.

I did not think the rhymes in this piece seemed forced, so I will assume that I was wrong since you took the time to ask.