03-20-2014, 09:43 AM
Yes, that's better, especially the first part, still needs a tap on the break though. When you let your anger come through, you as the victim comes through also, and renders such parts as:
"‘They’ used to scare me,
but not anymore. No,
the millions that believed
in the man
are the terrifying
‘Ones’."
disingenuous!
Dale
"‘They’ used to scare me,
but not anymore. No,
the millions that believed
in the man
are the terrifying
‘Ones’."
disingenuous!
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.