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Pieces of you
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03-20-2014, 07:58 AM
I made the mistake of reading some other replies and now feel completely inadequate to comment. I will say that I found the last line was one of the weakest lines, I think if the last verse was made stronger rather than having the feeling of being slightly abandoned the poem would finish stronger
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Pieces of you - by nhanna1223 - 02-06-2014, 10:27 PM
RE: Pieces of you - by ralex003 - 02-07-2014, 11:46 AM
RE: Pieces of you - by gpiper - 02-10-2014, 02:53 PM
RE: Pieces of you - by alatos - 02-11-2014, 12:17 AM
RE: Pieces of you - by Erthona - 02-11-2014, 04:03 AM
RE: Pieces of you - by screenmutt - 02-18-2014, 09:57 PM
RE: Pieces of you - by Daacobra - 03-17-2014, 07:19 PM
RE: Pieces of you - by chrisgas - 03-20-2014, 07:58 AM
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