03-20-2014, 01:52 AM
(03-20-2014, 12:15 AM)entwife Wrote:(03-19-2014, 11:36 PM)71degrees Wrote: More in tune w/5-7-5 now. Not a must, but something my Writers' Group tries to adhere to when we finish a session.\too bad, this would be a really good senryu if it wasn't so wordy, the title is great.
Thanks. Not being that versed in senryu, I always assumed it to be the more humorous or satirical side of human nature, and not the sensual.