03-19-2014, 07:53 PM
(03-19-2014, 06:56 PM)tectak Wrote:Gluttony is apropos, as this is most rhymes that I have ever packed into a tiny poem. Burp...(03-19-2014, 06:30 PM)ChristopherSea Wrote:Oh Lord has it come to this(03-19-2014, 12:26 PM)Erthona Wrote: .Anything to keep the Haiku/Senyru definition controversy going, right? OK Dale, it that is legit, than is this?:
There was a senorita who ate
chips and Velveeta who’s sweeta
and happy she did eat her!
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Note:
Definition of SENRYU
: a 3-line unrhymed Japanese poem structurally similar to haiku but treating human nature usually in an ironic or satiric vein
http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/senryu
Paco says sharp cheddar
is better
with Luchetta’s sweet taco
that we must strive to fail; to rhyme
is not a sin like gluttony.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris


