A Senryū
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(03-19-2014, 06:56 PM)tectak Wrote:  
(03-19-2014, 06:30 PM)ChristopherSea Wrote:  
(03-19-2014, 12:26 PM)Erthona Wrote:  .

There was a senorita who ate
chips and Velveeta who’s sweeta
and happy she did eat her!



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Note:

Definition of SENRYU
: a 3-line unrhymed Japanese poem structurally similar to haiku but treating human nature usually in an ironic or satiric vein

http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/senryu
Anything to keep the Haiku/Senyru definition controversy going, right? OK Dale, it that is legit, than is this?:


Paco says sharp cheddar
is better
with Luchetta’s sweet taco
Oh Lord has it come to this
that we must strive to fail; to rhyme
is not a sin like gluttony.

SmileSmileSmile
Gluttony is apropos, as this is most rhymes that I have ever packed into a tiny poem. Burp...
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Messages In This Thread
A Senryū - by Erthona - 03-19-2014, 12:26 PM
RE: A Senryū - by ChristopherSea - 03-19-2014, 06:30 PM
RE: A Senryū - by tectak - 03-19-2014, 06:56 PM
RE: A Senryū - by ChristopherSea - 03-19-2014, 07:53 PM
RE: A Senryū - by Erthona - 03-20-2014, 01:58 AM
RE: A Senryū - by ChristopherSea - 03-23-2014, 03:57 AM
RE: A Senryū - by billy - 03-22-2014, 04:57 PM



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