Cuckoo Haiku 2

[tectak]

Cuckoo Haiku 2

Contend you not with
buds that burst anew in Spring.
Same leaves grow each year.

nice haiku, I'd drop the periods and capitals, they break the 'one breath' flow.

I KNOW you would I took two breaths!
Best,
tectak.

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Contempt you have
for exploding leaves
and contending dales

I am sure I do not know what you mean
Best,
Tom

Contend you not with
buds that burst anew in Spring.
the same leaves grow each year

and fall in fall
a fearful sight these heady hills
eroded down to desolate, dismal dales

Are we talking lingua in maxilla here? I was.
Best,
tectak