Dusk
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I'm busy and have not much time to thoughtfully praise or expound, but what a beautiful little poem. I took this one in like I was in an art gallery gazing at an oil painting where all this was taking place at once.

You're quite the talent, my friend.
You can't hate me more than I hate myself.  I win.

"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."

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Dusk - by jeremyyoung - 03-19-2014, 07:05 AM
RE: Dusk - by NobodyNothing - 03-19-2014, 07:28 AM
RE: Dusk - by milo - 03-19-2014, 07:48 AM
RE: Dusk - by jeremyyoung - 03-19-2014, 08:46 AM
RE: Dusk - by chrisgas - 03-20-2014, 08:42 AM
RE: Dusk - by jeremyyoung - 03-20-2014, 09:26 AM



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