The smell of death outside my door
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I like the first verse, the second is a little bottom heavy and confused.

The first verse has a playful quality, it is sharply pointed, and witty.
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The smell of death outside my door - by Erthona - 03-18-2014, 03:56 AM
RE: The smell of death outside my door - by jeremyyoung - 03-18-2014, 10:41 PM



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