The smell of death outside my door

The smell of death outside my door

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03-18-2014, 01:04 PM

Hi. Thanks for the read. I was thinking (could be wrong, I usually am) that those two lines...

love without a dollar-fifty
won't get me a cup of coffee

...just might read better as...

love without a dollar-fifty
will not buy a cup of coffee

I don't know, probably not.

Anyway...tender regards, and thanks again for the read.

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The smell of death outside my door - by Erthona - 03-18-2014, 03:56 AM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by tectak - 03-18-2014, 04:05 AM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by Erthona - 03-18-2014, 04:12 AM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by ChristopherSea - 03-18-2014, 04:54 AM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by tectak - 03-18-2014, 06:14 PM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by ChristopherSea - 03-18-2014, 06:39 PM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by Erthona - 03-18-2014, 04:58 AM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by ellajam - 03-18-2014, 07:06 AM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by Erthona - 03-18-2014, 12:41 PM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by NobodyNothing - 03-18-2014, 01:04 PM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by jeremyyoung - 03-18-2014, 10:41 PM

RE: The smell of death outside my door - by Erthona - 03-24-2014, 02:37 PM

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