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(03-18-2014, 09:39 AM)jeremyyoung Wrote:  The Bleeding Hearts are lamenting Black-Eyed Susan’s tragedy.
Four O’clock was the dreadful hour when she drank a Hemlock tea.

Her abusive Jack-In-The-Pulpit should rightly be defrocked.
Viola bows a stirring Blues to assuage the garden shock.

Moonflowers sway as white ghosts, to the Nightshade’s muted horn.
Troubled gardens are rarely Mum on muggy summer morns.

Nearing dawn’s Canterbury Bells, a Monkshood shrouds his eyes,
the local friar will chime a plea for Morning Glory reprise.
Yes, that works too jeremy. Much obliged for your read and sharing your long line version. Thumbsup
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Avant-garde-n - by ChristopherSea - 02-25-2014, 06:18 AM
RE: Avant-garde-n - by geoff - 02-25-2014, 09:57 AM
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RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 1) - by Erthona - 02-26-2014, 08:47 AM
RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 1) - by geoff - 02-26-2014, 09:14 AM
RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 1) - by ChristopherSea - 02-26-2014, 09:45 AM
RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 1) - by Erthona - 02-26-2014, 02:21 PM
RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 2) - by ChristopherSea - 02-26-2014, 07:19 PM
RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 2) - by Erthona - 02-27-2014, 12:36 AM
RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 2) - by ChristopherSea - 02-27-2014, 02:11 AM
RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 2) - by Erthona - 03-03-2014, 01:36 AM
RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 2) - by ChristopherSea - 03-03-2014, 09:26 PM
RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 3) - by ChristopherSea - 03-17-2014, 11:30 PM
RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 3) - by jeremyyoung - 03-18-2014, 09:39 AM
RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 3) - by ChristopherSea - 03-18-2014, 10:55 AM
RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 3) - by jeremyyoung - 03-18-2014, 11:07 AM
RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 3) - by ChristopherSea - 03-18-2014, 06:36 PM
RE: Avant-garde-n - by Erthona - 04-08-2014, 02:03 PM
RE: Avant-garde-n - by ChristopherSea - 04-08-2014, 06:37 PM



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