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Come Leaves Burst v3

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03-18-2014, 12:00 AM

(03-17-2014, 10:22 PM)jeremyyoung Wrote: Thank for your feedback Wordjunky

As a certificated autodidact, pHd, with honours, I value your opinion without CV.

One thing I do know, when I have thought about the feedback, and considered things, an exclamation mark will not be involved... ghastly things. But your point about structure is well made.

tectak
I'm not sure what that is in your hand, but it appears to be leaking.

...a blind stag, perhaps Smile

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Come Leaves Burst v3 - by jeremyyoung - 03-13-2014, 07:34 PM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by ChristopherSea - 03-14-2014, 09:45 PM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by jeremyyoung - 03-14-2014, 10:01 PM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by ChristopherSea - 03-14-2014, 10:07 PM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by jeremyyoung - 03-14-2014, 10:30 PM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by John Galt - 03-16-2014, 12:39 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by jeremyyoung - 03-16-2014, 02:47 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by ChristopherSea - 03-16-2014, 03:19 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by ChristopherSea - 03-17-2014, 12:58 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by John Galt - 03-16-2014, 04:23 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by jeremyyoung - 03-16-2014, 04:34 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by jeremyyoung - 03-17-2014, 01:17 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by milo - 03-17-2014, 01:41 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by 71degrees - 03-17-2014, 01:59 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by jeremyyoung - 03-17-2014, 03:09 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by 71degrees - 03-17-2014, 03:39 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by tectak - 03-17-2014, 04:21 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by jeremyyoung - 03-17-2014, 04:36 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by tectak - 03-17-2014, 06:48 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by jeremyyoung - 03-17-2014, 06:55 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by tectak - 03-17-2014, 04:12 PM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by WordJunky - 03-17-2014, 05:44 PM

RE: Come Leaves Burst - by jeremyyoung - 03-17-2014, 10:22 PM

RE: Come Leaves Burst v2 - by tectak - 03-18-2014, 12:00 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst v2 - by WordJunky - 03-18-2014, 12:30 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst v2 - by jeremyyoung - 03-18-2014, 12:05 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst v2 - by tectak - 03-18-2014, 07:37 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst v2 - by jeremyyoung - 03-18-2014, 01:21 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst v2 - by milo - 03-18-2014, 09:48 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst v2 - by jeremyyoung - 03-18-2014, 10:05 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst v3 - by tectak - 03-19-2014, 08:31 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst v3 - by jeremyyoung - 03-19-2014, 09:12 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst v3 - by 71degrees - 03-19-2014, 09:40 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst v3 - by jeremyyoung - 03-19-2014, 10:01 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst v3 - by 71degrees - 03-19-2014, 10:46 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst v3 - by jeremyyoung - 03-19-2014, 10:55 AM

RE: Come Leaves Burst v3 - by ChristopherSea - 03-19-2014, 06:58 PM

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