Torn
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I really like this poem, it's very simple and captivating. The progressive journey of the rope through the harsh realities of time is very clear; a good reminder that nothing last forever and the new and fresh would eventually become the old and torn. A great poem!
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Torn - by pickles - 03-15-2014, 04:37 PM
RE: Torn - by ChristopherSea - 03-16-2014, 10:55 PM
RE: Torn - by shemthepenman - 03-16-2014, 11:39 PM
RE: Torn - by Daacobra - 03-17-2014, 07:57 PM
RE: Torn - by TamyPocer777 - 03-19-2014, 12:40 AM



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